User:Jessika Thiele: Difference between revisions

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Well, what can I say more than a blank page could say in here?

My life reveals through art and poetry.I find this satisfaction through literature.

Moonlit

At the edge of a brain

I lay with my thoughts;

close to your mind

a spear; constrain.

Hands push it along the line;

was a contract with birth

your guardian angel once did sign.

Glorious words of moral

Arms sail with force

spare-haired legs; dark; a moonlit night

stroke the surface of my white

A short sigh of relief reveals remorse.

                                                         (Lady of Poetry)

I suppose my own blog site might be more helpful to characterize me: www.ladyofpoetry.blogspot.com , www.ladyofpoetry.beepworld.de

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-Blue in time
+Moonlit
-whole in depth;
-a perfection
+At the edge of a brain
-responding fine.
+I lay with my thoughts;
+close to your mind
-White in purity
+a spear; constrain.
-part in wine;
+Hands push it along the line;
-a truth
+was a contract with birth
-held by reflection.
+your guardian angel once did sign.
-Green in faith
+Glorious words of moral
-cuts the slices;
-goddess
+Arms sail with force
-questioning path.
+spare-haired legs; dark; a moonlit night
+stroke the surface of my white
+A short sigh of relief reveals remorse.